Monday 23 November 2015

Athletics writing

Voiceover: mace


Jumper1: mace


Jumper 2: Toby


Lines: voiceover: hey what are doing!? Jumper 1: we are doing invisible high jump. Voiceover: but I moved it yesterday and replaced it with a shark tank. Flashback- jumper 1: ooooooooowwwwwwwwwwww something bit me!!!!!!


Flashback: voiceover drags something away and pushes something back.


Arguing person: Who is voiceover? Author: he is mason. Arguing person: But isn't he jumper 1? Author: He is but he's two characters. 

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